Krista: Raising kids to embrace the world, then they
In this column by Krista, she explains how when your child is young, you want to encourage them to do great things in the world, but when the time finally comes, there's a little bit of monotony in it. She explains how the parent is still blissful seeing their kid do such great things, but at the same time it's hard to do so.
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The line in this column that I believe is best written is the very last line when she says, "It's the most humbling lesson of parenting: We may be in charge of the prologue, but only they get to write the story of their lives." The way she kind of compares life to a novel really impacts the reader because it shows how little of time our parents are actually in charge of our lives. It made me feel as if there is a whole life waiting for me after schooling. In this line she uses one long and involved sentence, but while she does this, she splits it up with a colon and multiple commas to make it seem less run-on. I believe she does this because she can't really get that one point across in multiple sentences. She also kind of uses connotation in her writing to kind of make you feel something.
I think Ramsey's writing style is; she tries to get the reader to relate to the subject instead of just giving all facts. In her column,
For better vision, kids need time outdoors, she makes you kind of relate to her writing by stating, "The kid who used to walk home from school looking at houses and trees now rides home staring at a screen not much bigger than his hand. The teenager who used to research at the library or hang out with friends outdoors now does her studying and socializing in front of a computer in her bedroom." Most kids can kind of relate to this quote because almost every teenager is on his/her phone for a large portion of their day. It's a fact. Ramsey makes you relate in her article
Super Bowl QBs score points for great style, is when she states, "And almost no one dresses up any more for things that were once considered something of an event – dinner at a nice restaurant, religious services, plane flights." This is relatable because for almost everyone there has been a time where maybe we were supposed to dress up, but we didn't. In her article
Raising kids to embrace the world, then they do, she makes the reader relate because when she says, "They think of it as heading home. We think of it as leaving home." This is relatable because a lot of teenagers are excited to leave "home" and make a new one, when the parent thinks the exact opposite.
Questions for Krista Ramsey:
1) what inspired you to be a columnist and share your ideas with everyone?
2) How do you show your voice in your writing so well?
3) What do you do to connect with the reader so well?